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Chapter 5 - A Taste of Poison

The attack began at ten o’clock the following morning.

I was in the middle of reviewing the weekend wedding banquet orders when the soft, continuous ding of my email inbox turned into a relentless, machine-gun rattle.

Celia burst into my office without knocking, her face pale. “Maya. You need to look at Google Reviews and Yelp. Right now.”

I pulled up the hotel’s dashboard. Our five-star rating—built painstakingly over eighty-four months of sleepless nights, personalized service, and immaculate upkeep—was plummeting in real-time.

*“Found cockroaches in the bridal suite! Disgusting service. The manager, Maya, was rude and hostile when we complained!”* — 1 star, posted 10 minutes ago.

*“Food poisoning from the seafood risotto at the terrace restaurant! Stay away from this dirty trap!”* — 1 star, posted 8 minutes ago.

*“Arrogant management. They discriminate against locals. Avoid at all costs!”* — 1 star, posted 5 minutes ago.

Sixteen one-star reviews had been posted in the span of twelve minutes, all from brand-new accounts with stock profile pictures.

“Bots,” I said, my teeth grinding together so hard my jaw ached. “Cassandra.”

Before Celia could reply, a sudden commotion echoed from the marble lobby downstairs. High-pitched laughter, the sharp clatter of designer heels, and the unmistakable, nasal drawl of my sister pierced through the grand foyer.

I stood up, smoothed my suit jacket, and walked out onto the mezzanine balcony overlooking the lobby.

Cassandra had arrived with an entourage. Four young women dressed in pastel linen dresses, oversized designer sunglasses, and carrying pastel shopping bags from the boutique shops on Broughton Street were draped over the antique velvet sofas.

Cassandra was standing directly in front of the front desk, holding up a pristine bone-china teacup, her voice ringing out so that every guest checking in could hear her.

“Excuse me? Young man?” she squawked at Toby, our twenty-year-old front desk clerk, who looked like he was on the verge of tears. “Is this what you consider hot water? It’s tepid. And there’s a smudge on this cup. Is this how you treat Savannah locals? My husband is Derek Caldwell. He’s about to be named senior partner at the largest firm in this district, and I will not be treated like a second-class citizen in this run-down dump!”

One of her friends giggled loudly, holding up her iPhone and recording the entire scene for Instagram. “Total nightmare hotel, you guys. The decor is so dated, and the staff is completely clueless.”

Guests waiting in line shifted uncomfortably. A couple checking in for their twenty-fifth anniversary looked horrified, whispering to each other and stepping back toward the exit.

I didn't take the elevator. I walked down the grand mahogany staircase, my footsteps slow, measured, and resounding against the wood like the toll of an iron bell.

The lobby went quiet as I reached the bottom step.

“Toby,” I said smoothly, never breaking eye contact with my sister. “Take your break. I’ll handle Mrs. Caldwell personally.”

Toby nodded frantically and darted into the back office.

Cassandra turned to me, lowering her sunglasses down the bridge of her nose, offering me a sugary, vicious smile. “Oh, look! The prodigal sister has descended from her tower. We were just enjoying some morning tea, Maya. Though your standards have clearly slipped. But then again, you never did have good taste, did you?”

I walked behind the desk, resting my hands flat against the cool marble counter.

“Cassandra,” I said, my voice dangerously calm, carrying across the silent lobby. “You have sixty seconds to take your hired friends and walk out of my hotel. If you are still standing on this rug at the sixty-first second, I will have you formally trespassed by the police, and I will personally submit your Instagram livestream to the State Bar Ethics Committee as evidence of tortious interference with a commercial business.”

The smug smile vanished from Cassandra’s face, replaced by a dark, ugly scowl. She stepped closer to the desk, lowering her voice so her friends couldn’t hear.

“You think you’re so clever, don’t you?” she hissed. “You think you can embarrass Dad and Derek and just walk away? Dad gave you until tomorrow morning, Maya. If you don't wire that money, Derek is going to destroy you. He’s going to take this building, bulldoze your little dream, and put our name on the marquee!”

I looked closely at her eyes. Beneath the heavy mascara and the arrogance, I saw something else.

Panic.

Her hands were shaking slightly as she clutched her designer purse. Her breath was shallow. This wasn’t just entitled cruelty. This was terror.

I tilted my head, studying her. “Why are you really here, Cassandra? Sixty thousand dollars isn't a down payment for an Ardsley Park estate. An earnest deposit on a two-million-dollar house is at least two hundred thousand.”

Cassandra’s throat bobbed. She took an involuntary step back.

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“And Derek isn't acting like a man who’s about to make partner,” I whispered, leaning forward. “He’s acting like a man who’s about to get caught.”

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