Chapter 7 - The Counter-Strike

By dawn, Hospital San José was bathed in a pale, gray light.
In ICU Room 402, the mechanical hiss of the ventilator had finally ceased. The extubation procedure had been completed two hours earlier. Mariana lay propped up against pillows, an oxygen cannula resting beneath her nostrils, her throat raw and burning.
Beside her sat Sebastián.
His eyes were hollow, sunken with shadows, but his hand gripped hers with a fierce, unbreakable tenacity. When Mariana had opened her eyes thirty minutes ago, there had been no confusion between them. No need for long explanations.
Sebastián had simply buried his face against her neck, weeping with a broken, shuddering intensity that rattled his entire frame, repeating: *"I know. Mariana, my God, I know everything."*
Now, the door opened. Dr. Valenzuela walked in, accompanied by two men in dark suits wearing federal badges, and an elderly woman carrying an official legal portfolio.
"Mrs. Navarro," the federal agent, Inspector Ramos, said with a respectful nod. "We have reviewed the forensic audio, the banking logs, and the emergency room diagnostic reports. The Querétaro District Attorney has authorized an immediate sting operation. Are you strong enough to participate?"
Mariana swallowed, her voice a cracked, raspy whisper. "I have... waited four days... to look them in the eye."
"Here is the strategy," Mateo explained, stepping forward from the corner of the room. "Teresa arranged for an unauthorized notary public—a corrupt contact who handles her offshore filings—to arrive at ten o'clock this morning. She believes Sebastián is having a nervous breakdown and is ready to sign over complete legal conservatorship of your estate, including the medical trust."
"Lorena’s creditors have given her until noon," Sebastián added, his voice cold, devoid of any filial affection. "She is desperate. She will be here with Mother to witness the signature and immediately initiate the bank wire from her tablet."
"Inspector Ramos has positioned four plainclothes officers outside the floor," Dr. Valenzuela added. "We have swapped the hospital notary with a certified legal clerk from the state prosecutor’s office. The document Sebastián signs will look identical to a power of attorney, but it is an evidentiary confession of attempted grand larceny, conspiracy, and premeditated attempted murder."
"What about Leo and Sofia?" Mariana whispered, her heart aching for her babies.
"I spent the morning in the NICU," Sebastián smiled softly, his thumb caressing her cheek. "Sofia’s vitals have stabilized. The pediatric team took her off the critical list an hour ago. Leo is breathing room air. They are safe, Mariana. The hospital has placed an armed guard at the nursery entrance."
A sharp knock sounded at the door.
A nurse poked her head in. "Mr. Navarro? Your mother and sister have just stepped off the elevator with their legal counsel."
Inspector Ramos signaled to his partner. The two federal agents moved quietly behind the privacy partition near the bathroom. Mateo stepped back toward the window, adopting the posture of an anxious, helpless family friend.
Mariana closed her eyes slightly, allowing her body to sink into the mattress, feigning the look of a frail, barely conscious invalid.
Sebastián took a deep breath, smoothed down his suit jacket, and wiped every trace of rage from his face, replacing it with the blank, hollow expression of a shattered, defeated man.
"Let them in," Sebastián said.
The heavy door swung open.
Teresa walked in first, her demeanor that of an angelic matriarch carrying the burden of the world. Behind her came Lorena, whose face was flushed, her eyes darting nervously toward Mariana’s bed, clutching an expensive leather portfolio to her chest like a shield.
"Sebastián, my precious boy," Teresa cooed, crossing the room with open arms. "You look completely exhausted. Have you eaten anything at all?"
Sebastián allowed his mother to press her cheek against his, remaining completely limp in her embrace.
"I can't take this anymore, Mother," Sebastián mumbled, playing his part with chilling perfection. "The doctors say Sofia might have neurological damage. Mariana isn't speaking. The bank won't release funds for the private specialists without Mariana’s signature... I'm losing my mind."
Lorena stepped forward eagerly, unable to hide the predatory gleam in her eyes. "That’s why we brought Licenciado Morales, Sebastián. Mother can take over the financial burden. She can authorize the hospital bills, handle the offshore trust, and manage the logistics company so you can focus entirely on being here."
"Are the papers ready?" Sebastián asked, staring at the floor.
"Right here, darling," Teresa said softly, signaling the man behind Lorena. "Just sign the conservatorship declaration. Once you sign, Lorena and I will handle the bank transfer immediately. You won't have to worry about a single peso."
Mariana, from the bed, let out a deliberate, faint groan.
Teresa glanced at her with cold indifference before sliding the document and a heavy gold pen onto the rolling hospital tray in front of Sebastián.
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"Sign here, my son," Teresa whispered, her eyes fixed on the signature line. "Let Mother take care of everything."
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